Shiritori

Shiritori Corrections

The city was a world heritage The city was a world heritage city. The toy's kingdom in the Tokyo Dome city Do you mean .... The toy's kingdom is in Tokyo Dome ? The white dog looked like a soft toy Excellent The woman was in white. Good The composer is a cheerful woman. Good Jacques Offenback is a German composer. Good My shoulder stops my arm from dropping off. Good Recently I have a stiff shoulder Either "Recently ... I have had" Or "Recently ... I had ..." Things are not well in the economic market recently. haven't been ... recently are not ... (now) these cars are his favorit things. Good (Capital T please, favourite) The Americans need cars. Americans need cars. (in general .. in general) Best Buy is the bigest electronics stores in America. .. the biggest store .. It was past its best. Good My father doesn't like cats. Good My father-in-law lived next to his father. Good You look a lot like your father. Good The examination will be easy for you. Good I worked hard to pass the examination. Good The food processor hasn't worked. The food processor doesn't work. or The food processor hasn't worked since Sunday. Birds spend most their time looking for food. ... most of their ... She dances like a bird. Good Her hobby is belly dance. ....ing. Reading books is my hobby. Good The father bought his son a book. Good The English boy got to be a father. Do you mean this boy has become a father ? One year have passed since I started studying English. has passed Japan has four seasons in a year. But why not just 'Japan has four seasons' ? The Ginza is the most exclusive shopping area in Japan. Good An apple store is in Ginza. Um... suggestions .. 'There is an apple store in Ginza' or 'The apple store in Ginza is wonderful.' Today is sunny isn't it? Good Yes, it is. Good I play the piano every day. Good Composers compose and musicians play Good Composers compose. Good Kabuki actors are only men. Good Mendelssohn is a German composer. Good The man is famous as an actor. Good (The man is a famous actor. - even better !) You are a good man. Good Happy birthday to you. Good nice news makes me happy Good. (But capital N please) That apple looks nice. Good This is an apple. Good Some readers will like this. Good Popular books have lots of readers. Good Forthright men are not popular. Good The story goes back and forth. Good This cinema based on a Rakugo story Do you mean "This film is based on a Rakugo story" ? Today I went to the cinema. Good It's warm today. Good Spring is warm. Good April is in the spring. Good Easter is in April. Good This country is in the far east. Good England is a small country. Good This film was made in England Good "The Hours" is my favorite film. Good O'clock is used with full hours. Good My bed time is about eleven o'clock. Good She lies on the bed. Excellent ! The statesman shouldn't tell a lie. Statesmen shouldn't lie (?) War between the States. ?? No verb so it is not a sentence. They marched on the road againt the Iraq War. Good This month is March. Good The company went bankrupu last month. Good (bankrupt) This singing robot is a new product of our company. Good (but ... is one of our new products is better) The teacher is good at singing. Good I handed in my homework to the teacher. Good They're walking hand in hand. Good He comes here with walking. He walks here./ He comes here on foot. At last spring has come. Good You and I were in the same class the week before last. Good How nice of you! Good Gardenias smell nice. Good These flowers grew in her garden. ok This doll has got a basket with some flowers. Good You look like a doll. Good Even blind dogs might bite you ok (can is better) These holes were made by a small mole. Good A round of golf is 18 holes. Good Bowls are round. Very good The mountain looks like a bowl. Good The background of this photograph is taken in a famous mountain. The background in this photo is a mountain. The japanese has a red center circle with white background. japanese flag ... a white background No articles in japanese There are no articles in japanese. *Articles are not found in Japanese.* This sentence hasn't got any articles. Good ! "kingdom" is difficult for me to start and to make a sentence. .. make a sentence with. The dishes made in the United Kingdom. ... dishes are made ... I do the dishes. Good What kind of work do you do? Good My children are very kind. Good The Snowman is popular with children. Good Some trees are covered with snow. Good A refreshing breeze is swinging trees. the trees ? It's fun for me to go skiing. ok Holidays are fun. Good Rich men spend overseas in new year holidays. Rich people can afford to spend their new year hoidays abroad. ( ? ) Wealthy mean rich. s ? Health is better than wealth. Good Fishes is good for health. ... are ... Cats eat fishes. Great. This doughnut is too sweet to eat. Good She rounded a dough. She made a round shape with a piece of dough (! ?) She rounded a corner too fast and crashed into a cake shop. The earth is round. Very good That big satellite is going around the Earth Good The fashion show is big. Good My dresses are out of fashion. Good They're interesting dresses. Good TV games is very interesting. are not is My brothers always play video games. Good but 'are always playing' is better. His things for go camping are his brother's. Do you mean 'The things he goes camping with are his brother's,' ? Disasters may rob us of our important things. If there was a disaster we might/could loose a lot of important things. Last year was lots of a disaster. Last year there were lots of disasters. She's gone to England last year. Either 'She's gone to England' or ' She went to England last year'. The tyhoon has gone. Good This flood was caused by a tyhoon. Good My old picture was carried away by the flood. Good Our copy machine is very old. Good Her efforts should be copy. ?? .. be copied ?? (You should make an effort like her.) Beginners can be experts with a lot of effort. .. can become .. My English is a beginner. I'm a beginner at English. I'm fighting for get better my English. I'm fighting to get my English better. His jersey was torn to shreds by a fight. .. in a fight. South Orange is a one of county in New Jersey. South Orange is a town in New Jersey ? My room is facing the south. Good Her baby is asleep in the room. Good As yet(,) I haven't met her. Good but no comma please. Her broken leg hasn't recovered yet. ... hasn't mended yet. (to recover from... ) My personal computer has broken. Good I'm morning person. I'm a morning person (?) My father is called by his cat every morning. ..is woken up by our cat .. ?? My family is all fat. are I treasure my family. Good The world heritage is our treasure. Good The Himalayas are most long range in the world. longest His mask is too small for him. Good That eccentric man has worn a white mask. ok but why 'has worn'? His character is eccentric. Good One day I met him at Narita airport by chance. Good Female cats are smoller than male one. .. smaller than male ones. Her cats are all a female. .. are all female (adjective) Minerals are important to our health. inportant for our health important to me Health-conscious products interest her. Health products interest her. (products cannot be conscious) A popular song is a favorite song of mine. ok The hairdresser's near the station is very popular. Good The japanese almost have got black hair. Most Japanese have got black hair The East China Sea is between China and Japan. Good Asia is in the Far East. Good A terrorist felt a great love for own country. Terrorists ... love their countries ? The country has been increasingly isolated in Asia. ok The man was killed by a terrorist. Good Orson Welles appeard on the cinema "The third man" appeared in the film The beard is very well. His beard is very nice. (?) He's growing a beard. Good The industry is growing. Good In Hawaii tourism is the major industry. "a major" or "the main" I used to go to Hawaii. Good That earthquake tidal wave surprised us. Good Solar energy is good for the earth. Good Young person is full of energy. Young people are ... Her husband seems stingy person. Good Animal therapy was good for her. Good The dragon is an imaginary animal. Excellent The mountain erupted a few years ago. Good How height is the mountain? high Long tall Simon likes a height. Meaning not clear His arms are very long. Good Land mines are terrible arms. Good (weapons a better word) That inexpensive bag is mine. Good The bus tour is inexpensive. Good The student goes to school by bus. Good English makes me happy. Paul ok Now, Let's study English. Now let's study English. He goes to vocational school now. ..to A vocational school ?? Money comes and goes. Good YOU SPENT A LOT OF MONEY. Lowercase please. Please don't shout Nice talking with you. ok Women likes talking. Women like talking. What kind of music do you like? Good One of my friends is kind. Good Is Chinese grammar similar to Japanese one? Is Chinese grammar similar to Japanese ? Her husband began to learn Chinese. Her husband started learning Chinese last year. Her husband has started learning Chinese. Everyone admires her. Good Walking is good exercise for everyone. OK Every evening he takes the dog for a walk. Good The game starts at 7 tomorrow evening. Good The player injured his wrist during the game. Good He's recently bought a DVD player. Why not the past tense ? This message board has been very quiet recently. Good Kiki is pleased to read you message. Good Happy birthday, Kiki! Good April 12th is my birthday. Good The Japanese school year begins in April. Good The hostages were all Japanese. Good They released all the hostages. Good She's well known as a singer. Good The summer festival held in this region is well-known. OK Morning glorys greet me every morning in summer. Good What were you doing at 7.15 this morning? Good I know what you were. Good Her mother is in hospital now. Good He told her that he loved her. Good I shoped around for an aparetment. did you mean apartment ? Our next-door neighbor runs a bicycle shop. Good You alone will open the door. OK Can you sleep in a deserted house alone? Good I'm looking forward to hearing you. Good She's homely looking. Good The atmosphere of the Korean restaurant was homely. Good The beginning of the film had a dark atmosphere. Sorry, dark atmosphere not right but I don't know what to suggest. I'll start again from the beginning. Good It's exciting that the Winter Olympic Games start. is starting or has started Video games aren't always exciting. Good Four players are needed to do this game. to play This award is given to the best player. Good The homecooking book a Japanese woman wrote won a worldwide award. Good E.T. phones home. Good I muddled him up with his father on the phone. Excellent My hands are covered with mud. Good The moment I arrived at home I washed my hands .. arrived home .. She canceled her concert at the last moment. Good The booking for flight to Narita was canceled. for ?? flight The popular restaurant she recommended me needs booking. Good The musical is so exciting as to be popular. ok They sold out of all the tickets for the musical. Good Being expensive, so this book can't be sold. Being expensive this book can't be sold. The dishwasher she bought is expensive. Good Tell me how to make this dish. Good Some colleagues came to see me. Good That guy is one of my colleagues. Good An actor who plays a bad character is not always a bad guy. Good They're laughing at an actor. Good His funny joke made his family burst out laughing. Good My job as a writer gives me a lot of fun. Good Iob is a mistaken spelling of job. Good I'll pay a fat fee for good iob. .. for a good .. Crime doesn't pay. Good It's wrong to commite a crime. commit crimes If it's true, she must admit being wrong. No comma Writing letters, she gets tired of it. Not written English He received a lot of letters. Good Your order has been received. Good It's out of order. Good Chocolate cookies were sold out. The His sisters help their mother cook. Good My mother has got three sisters. Good This is my mother. Good What station is this? Good The street leads you to Tokyo station. OK The shop is at the end of this street. Good Many useful tools are sold at the shop. OK Please dry the dishes with the cloth. Good Cloth wrappers are very useful. ok The well has run dry. Good The days surrounding next Sunday will be rain. It's going to rain over the weekend. There're earth-friendly cars on sale these days. There are eco-friendly ... (eco is short for ecological) The moon is so far from the earth. OK Artemis is the goddess of the moon. Good Sunday morning he usually watches a TV programme about art. On ... I'm planning to sale my original T shirts in a live house next Sunday. .. to sell my .. All the students in the class agreed to the plan. Good People haven't changed at all. Good He knows a lot of people. Good She's safe for now. Good No places are completely safe. Good The Italian restaurant is a one of my favorite place. OK The dinner was Italian. Good What are you going to cook for dinner? Good How beautiful the red leaves in the park are! Good Fireworks are very beautiful. Good The disaster film is about a high rise fire. Which disaster film ? The flood by Hurricane Katrina led to a great disaster. .. caused by .. The downpour had caused a flood. Good I'm driving in a downpour. Good These days I'm into driving. Good Tomorrow is another day. Good My family and his family are going to have dinner together tomorrow. OK Well, how is your family? Good Her dog is trained well. well trained Immediately I went to the vet with my dog. I suddenly had to go to the vet with my dog. The party was gave for me. was given How come she didn't come to the party? Good An expected guest didn't come. Good He arrived later than I had expected. Good He'll soon arrive. Good The peace settlement was broken soon. OK Everyone has hoped for world peace. Everyone hopes for .. The legend was believed by everyone. Good She's broken her leg. Good His belt has broken. Good My schedule is very tight. Good Let me make sure of the schedule. Good Horse races excite me. Good The States have many different races. The States have got people of many different races. Mexico is nex to the United States. next Shiritori is one of very difficult games for me. Shiritori is a very difficult game for me. Some words are difficult to play shiritori. .. to play Shiritori with. Let him go. Good Fatty food isn't good for him. Good Your patterned tights makes you look fat. Good Her nightclothes have a floral pattern. Good A poetry reading was held last night. OK Wordsworth is a famous English poet. Good It's important to keep your word. Good This information is very important Good Computers can be risky about the leakage of information. Using computers can result in a loss of privacy. 6 students in this class have their own computers. Good He works on Monday to Friday between 10 to 6. He works from Mondays to Fidays between 10 and 6. Or .. from 10 to 6. GO on with your work. Get on with your work An exciting film is now on. There's an exciting film on now. Exiting is a mistake in spelling of exciting. Exiting is a mistaken spelling of exciting.. The concert I went to yesterday was very exiting. Good One of my friends is going to give a piano concert. Good Do you like this one? Good What business does he do? What business is he in? Year by year he has been expanding his business. Good That writer got the Akutagawa Award this year. Good Mr Parker is an accountant as well as a writer. Good They picniced in the Yoyogi Park. in Yoyogi Park He plans a picnic. He is planning .. This weekend I have plans. Wrong word order The table I bought in Bali will arrive next week. Good There are some flowers in the vase. Good You mean you don't want to go there? Do you mean ... They're expensive for me. Good The French restaurant I went was very expensive .. I went to .. The films I saw yesterday were both of French. Either 'both French' or 'both in French' Gone With The Wind is one of my favorite films. Good Her little earring is gone. OK but 'has gone' is better I sometimes drink a little. Good Her husband is gentle. Good I'm better at English than my husband. Good His family is going to go to London. Good We are the Addams family. Good There you are. Good Someone like my wife is standing there. OK What style of room do you like? Um ... how about What hairstyle has she got? The needlework of mine is French style. How about My needlework is the French sort. Her mother is good at needlework. Good The bag was made for me by my mother. OK There is a lot of money in my bag. Good Get away from here. Good The bank robbers called Bonnie and Clyde couldn't get away. Good Before going shopping I went to the bank. Good Eating raw fish was unacceptable in many countries before. Eating raw fish used to be unacceptable ... The carrots he didn't eat were still raw. OK Her dog was almost hit by a car. Good Our family has a pet, dog. The comma is not necessary Our family has a pet, dog. The comma is not necessary Tell me about your family. Good I've lost the ring you gave to me. ... you gave me. Please call me if you get lost. Good Come in please. Good The lagoon where he used to play was filled in. Good I've recovered from jet lag. Good Morocco leather is good for book cover. Moroccan ... covers. I plan a trip to Morocco. I'm planning ... He's dead against the plan. Good They fear that he may be dead. Good I've frozen with fear. OK My computer has been frozen. OK - though it's not clear from this if it is still frozen. Maybe you meant 'My computer has frozen' which means that it is not working now. What's wrong with your computer? Good Don't scold me for getting this wrong. OK - I won't ! Recently I've been liable to catch cold. Colds (countable plural) She's become a full-timer recently. Good. Some new classmates have come. OK My bed is new. Good It's time to go to bed Good Cold day, isn't it? OK You'd better gargle not to catch a cold. You'd better gargle so as not to catch a cold.